Ujaswin wrote:
GMATNinja can you please advise the right way to eliminate the incorrect answer choices. I was stuck between A & D.
I'm very late to the party, but since the question was very much addressed to us, I'll take a stab, just in case it helps somebody out there.
Here's the full sentence using choice (D):
Quote:
(D) Many stock traders in the United States have set out to become global investors, convinced that limiting their investments to the U.S. stock market, which, though certainly home to the stocks of some of the world’s great corporations, restricted their gains.
Stripping out the clause beginning with "thought certainly home...", we're left with:
"Many stock traders in the United States have set out to become global investors, convinced that limiting their investments to the U.S. stock market, which restricted their gains."
Well, the first problem is that it's not entirely clear what's being modified by the "which..." clause. Does it modify "U.S. stock market"? Investments? Limiting? The last one (limiting) seems to make the most sense - what is the thing that "restricted their gains"? LIMITING their investments to the U.S. stock market.
Okay, fine... MAYBE the "which" clause is okay here - "limiting" functions as a noun, and "which..." is a noun modifier.
But if we strip out the "which" clause, we are left with:
"Many stock traders in the United States have set out to become global investors, convinced that limiting their investments to the U.S. stock market."
Notice that there is no verb for "limiting"!
The following examples might make that more clear:
- "Riding on my motorcycle is fun." - No problem. "Riding" is the subject, and "is" is the verb.
- "Riding on my motorcycle, which was manufactured in Japan, is fun." - Again, no problem. The only difference is that we've added a noun modifier ("which...") to modify "motorcycle".
- "Riding on my motorcycle, which was manufactured in Japan." - No good! The "which" clause has its own verb ("was manufactured"), but there is no main verb for the subject of the sentence ("Riding"). If we strip out the "which" clause, we are left with, "Riding on my motorcycle." That's clearly not a sentence.
Back to choice (D), we have a similar problem. The subject of the "that..." clause is "limiting", and "limiting" needs a verb to go with it. The verb "restricted" belongs to the "which..." clause, and we never actually get a verb to pair with "limiting".
Choice (A) avoids that problem:
Quote:
(A) Many stock traders in the United States have set out to become global investors, convinced that limiting their investments to the U.S. stock market, even though it is certainly home to the stocks of some of the world’s great corporations, restricted their gains.
What are many stock traders convinced of? They are convinced that LIMITING {...}
restricted their gains.
I hope that helps!