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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 September 2020 and 7 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): EckstineAbi, Wikied56, Zoe L. Norman, Ravenclawforthewin, Nalcreate, Earthtoivy (article contribs).

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This article has issues with redundancy and conciseness. Sentences are either too long or too short and often repeat A Radiant Curve multiple times. Some variation is needed to make the article more interesting and engaging while still maintaining an appropriate tone.

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+This article has issues with redundancy and conciseness. Sentences are either too long or too short and often repeat ''A Radiant Curve'' multiple times. Some variation is needed to make the article more interesting and engaging while still maintaining an appropriate tone.